This week we have written our own narrative based on How to Catch a Star by Oliver Jeffers. We changed our story to feature a little girl, who is afraid of the dark, on her journey to catch the moon.
Below are photos of Gabriela's whole story. She used some initial ideas but wrote the story on her own.
Gabriela 1A
Here is Ivo's amazing problem, resolution and ending:
First she tried dad's rocket boots. She put them on her feet and switched it on and flew into the sky. But it ran out of fuel so she crasht back down. Next she tried getting mum's puwrful shooting bow and arrow but it kood not reach the silvery moon.
Suddenly she sees the moon in the pond so she grabt a fishing net and grabt the moon. "Yes finily I grabt the moon!" She estaticaly screamed. She did not know that it was a paper mashae moon with a light bul in it. "
Ivo 1D
Linking to our space theme, we learnt about the history of space travel. We put significant trips into space onto a time line. Here is some writing about Neil Armstrong, the first man to land on the moon, alongside Buzz Aldrin.
Felicia 1M
Year 2
This week in 2F have been writing postcards from the seaside to our friends from last term’s topic the rainforest. Brandon has written a post card to Mr Sloth telling him all about his trip to the beach.
Brandon 2F
This week in Literacy 2S we have focussed on various ways to communicate
in writing, to others about our day at the seaside
Imaan 2S
2D has been looking at adjectives to describe people. We
wanted to see how each person in our class thought of a word differently. One
of the words we looked at was beautiful. The children needed to use anything
they could find outdoors to represent this word.
Ewan, Mark and Massimo worked in a team and created a princess doing ballet.
Ewan, Mark and Massimo worked in a team and created a princess doing ballet.
"When Miss Denny said the word beautiful my team
immediately thought of a princess but we didn’t think it was good enough. We
changed our idea to a princess doing ballet because ballet is just as beautiful
as a princess."
-Ewan
-Ewan
"We picked to create a tree because nature is
beautiful and some plants have very beautiful flowers."
-Ashwin
-Ashwin
See you next week!
2D loved reading Gabriela's story. We really liked the fact you have used adjectives and punctuation in your writing. We think that next time you need to read through your work to make sure you have selected the right words.
ReplyDeleteGreat work!